Sample thesis computer science

Below are sample essays I have received from your classmates.  For each essay, I'll post at least a couple examples of papers with my comments so that you get a sense of what I am looking for.   I intend my comments to be constructive, and they may sound harsh or sometimes appear sarcastic, but I read these drafts trying to be a typical reader, giving a sentence-by-sentence run-down of what's going through my head.  In essence I am having a mental dialog with these papers, and my comments range from notes about the content and structure to grammar and usage.

The Sacred Grove of Oshogbo was one place I had been looking forward to visiting in Nigeria. As prevalent as indigenous religions still are in West Africa, it is often hard to find public expressions of them in towns and cities; the Christianity brought by European slavers and colonialists has taken root and pushed most of these religions out of mainstream life. But in the Sacred Grove shrines honor all the local deities, including Obatala, the god of creation, Ogun, the god of iron, and Oshun, the goddess of water, whose aqueous essence is made manifest by the river running through the trees. The place is unique in the Yoruba religion, and that intrigued me.

Sample thesis computer science

sample thesis computer science


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